Hey, me again, we'll who would it be anyway.
My holiday was so, so, so, so, so,
so, so, so, so cool.
My cousins Fineshia,
Shikaya and Jaydannie from Aulckland
came over to stay for the holidays. It
was so, so, so, so, so, so, so fun because
we went to Ten-Pin Bowling, swimming and
just hangging around the house.
Fineshia
is the oldest. She is very
funny, creative and a good singer.
Shikaya
is the seconed oldest out of the
three. Shes funny and a really good singer.
Jaydannie is the youngest out of the three.
Jaydannie is only four years old. She is so
cute and small.
We had so much fun playing
ten-pin bowling, netball, soccer, volleyball
and playing with my dog Bruno.
But not the
whole holidays were fun. My kitten Smudge
died. It was very sad for everyone. He got
hit by a car at night time on sunday before
the beginning
of the last term of school. He was so small with
his fluffy tail. When mum and I saw him at the
pet shop he was cute and small we had to get him .
Anyway back to my holiday.
Oh, I forgot to mention that my mum my
dad and I moved to a new place. Its so, so, so, so, so
so, so, so, sooooo cool because I get my own bedroom
my own computer and, a fish pond in the back
yard and my favourite my own bathroom!!!.
I feed the fish every two days. I remember one
Bruno drunk out of the fish pond.
Mum and I went to
watch Beverly Chuhuahua. It was so, so, so, soooo
ooooo funny, but I not going to tell you what it's about.
Two days before dad, Fineshia, Shikya , Jaydannie and
I went to the movies to watch Jounery to the Center of
the Earth it is such a cool movie but I'm not telling you
because it will ruin the surprise.
Well that was my holidays, nice writing to you
Update soon
SEE YOU LATER!!!!!
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Hi jaz,
That would have been cool playing tenbin boling. And sorry about your cat.That would have been sad. At least the rest of your holiday was good.
Sorry again about your cat.
Jazmine, this a great start to your blog page. You are showing great knowledge of how to use this as a networking tool where others can read and give you some feedback about what you are doing and what can be done next... You know need to look at proof reading your writing before you post so that you can address any spelling, grammar and punctuation mistakes before they affect the ability to read your work. Another thing I would like to see before the end of this week (ideally) would be for you to use paragraphs when writing to break up all your great ideas. When starting a new idea leave a gap. Keep up the great work!
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